effective transitions

 

‘Piedmont People’

PIEDMONT PEOPLE
Bert & Eleanor Harris
By Pete Smith

This essay (Word document above) was published by my older brother Pete Smith in the August 2026 issue of Warrenton Lifestyle, a magazine published in Warrenton, Fauquier County, VA.

It is notable that my brother — who majored in English — and I had the same outstanding English teacher in high school, Robert W. Tighe.

Mr. Tighe’s influence shows.

I have highlighted in boldface some key passages in the essay.

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Just north of Warrenton, on 900 rolling acres under permanent conservation easement, two scientists have spent the better part of a decade quietly doing something remarkable — turning a small, scrappy nonprofit into one of the region’s most vital centers for ecological research, environmental education, and land stewardship. Bert and Eleanor Harris, Co-Directors of The Clifton Institute, deserve far more recognition than they typically seek.

Their credentials alone are impressive. After earning his B.S. in Ecology and Biodiversity at Sewanee: The University of the South, Bert completed a Ph.D. in Ecology and Evolutionary Biology at the University of Adelaide, Australia, followed by a postdoctoral fellowship at Princeton University. Eleanor’s path was equally distinguished but charmingly indirect: she earned her B.A. in Mathematics at the University of Chicago, then — rediscovering a childhood love of animals — completed a Ph.D. in Quantitative and Computational Biology at Princeton, followed by a postdoctoral fellowship at the University of Maryland.

What they’ve built together at Clifton is a place that operates at the intersection of science, education, and conservation in ways that are rare for an organization of its size. Bert directs a program of ecological research aimed at providing actionable recommendations to landowners, working with his team to restore native plant and animal communities on the Institute’s 900-acre property — translating findings from peer-reviewed science into practical guidance for farmers and landowners in the Piedmont community. Eleanor oversees all of the organization’s activities as Co-Director, with a particular focus on education and development.

The numbers tell part of the Institute’s story. Staff have documented 2,600 different species on the property, and the Institute holds the largest dataset in the world on kestrel movements — a distinction remarkable for an organization rooted in Northern Virginia. Last year, more than 3,000 students came through Clifton’s education programs, experiencing firsthand what it means to walk through native meadows, observe raptors in flight, or press a wildflower seed into restored soil.

But perhaps what distinguishes Bert and Eleanor most is their philosophy. Before coming to Clifton, Bert observed that too much conservation biology is published in papers that nobody reads — and they’ve spent their tenure here correcting that. Programs range from field trips and summer camps to natural history lectures, nature journaling workshops, and an annual Native Plant Sale. The research they commission is carefully chosen: targeted projects that benefit how landowners can manage their land, not abstractions for distant audiences.

Fauquier County and the broader Northern Virginia Piedmont are richer — ecologically and communally — for the work Bert and Eleanor – and now their daughter Thea – have poured into this place. In a region under relentless development pressure, they tend to 900 acres of living, breathing evidence that conservation and community can grow together.

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In my post

Learning How to Write

Learning How to Write

I wrote:

Mr. Tighe said that there were three elements to good writing: unity, coherence, and emphasis.

The second element, coherence, Mr. Tighe explained that this was sort of like glue.

You had to tie all your paragraphs and sentences together by using transitional words that guide the reader: on the other hand, in contrast, furthermore, however, and so on. I got the idea quickly and was soon larding my essays with such words. It became a little heavy handed.

When I became a more experienced writer, I learned that you can achieve this in more subtle ways.

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My brother Pete obviously learned this.

Subject to strict word limits (space limitation), he has written an interesting essay that flows naturally.

With smooth, effective transitions.

That is not a boilerplate summary or report.

The article holds the reader’s interest — because the author, Smith, makes it a point to tell us why he is mentioning this or that.

You would be surprised how many writers never do this.

It is done in the transitions.

For example:

The numbers tell part of the Institute’s story.

But perhaps what distinguishes Bert and Eleanor most …

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I am attaching here an article I wrote for New York Newsday, in which. I achieved the same things as my brother did. I made it interesting by showing readers why the doctor and his career were of particular interest.

‘Borough Park Physician Retires After 60 Years’

 

— posted by Roger W. Smith

   August 2026

beyond the whale-road

 

oðþæt him æghwylc þara ymbsittendra

ofer hronrade hyran scolde

 

In the end each clan on the outlying coasts
beyond the whale-road had to yield to him

,– Beowulf, Prologue

A brilliant metaphor.

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connect to listen to prologue

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1GcAULmWJskG0QQVCvs2eBa16iaY54Krg/view

 

— posted by Roger W. Smith

   June 2026

an hundred

 

The invention of letters was followed more than two millenia later by the invention of movable type, a revolution without which the Renaissance and the Reformation would not even have been possible. But with the increase in the availability of the written word, there have been losses once again. For every work of Shakespeare put between covers, there are twenty cheap romance novels. For every book designed to teach an intelligent public, there are fifty newspapers distorting events. And for every learned tome, there are AN HUNDRED volumes of pornography.

“The Decline of the Book & the Fall of Western Civilization,” By Martin Cothran, The Imaginative Conservative, March 8, 2026

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It should be a hundred. An hundred is an archaic form which the author is using, in an affected manner, to show that he is highbrow.

 

— posted by Roger W. Smith

   April 2026

subject-verb disagreement

 

Backing Trump as he tries to rewrite the Constitution by executive fiat is much of the Republican Party and a collection of conservative legal scholars who rushed, in the wake of his decree, to try to give substance to the president’s thin, unpersuasive argument. Against Trump IS the weight of Supreme Court precedent, historical consensus and the plain words of the clause itself. – Jamelle Bouie, “The Birthright Con,” The New York Times, April 1, 2026

It should be: ARE the weight …

the subject of the sentence is comprised of three nouns: weight, conesnsus. and words.

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This should be elementary, but journalists and commentators in the media frequently ignore the rule. Sloppiness is one thing, but they obviously don’t even know it.

— posted by Roger W. Smith

   April 2026

“the English language, which is so expressive of the sublimest Sentiments”

 

Having already lost a lot of money earlier in the season, Handel now realized the folly of his gamble, and announced in London’s Daily Advertiser that he was closing his ambitious season early. He eloquently expressed the profound sorrow this failure* had given him in his announcement: “As I perceived, that joining good Sense and significant Words to Musick was the best Method of recommending this to an English Audience; I have directed my Studies that way, and endeavour’d to show, that the English language, which is so expressive of the sublimest Sentiments, [italics added] is the best adapted … to the full and solemn Kind of Musick. I have the Mortification now to find that my Labours to please are become ineffectual.” (program notes, Carnegie Hall)

*The premiere of his oratorio Hercules, in January 1745.

 

posted by Roger W. Smith

    March 2026

new vocabulary

 

new vocabulary – March 2026

 

I continue to look up new words and those the meaning of which intrigues me.

See above Word document.

 

– posted by Roger W. Smith

   March 2026

 

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See also:

 

 

more new vocabulary

 

 

new vocabulary, February-May 2025

 

 

new vocabulary

 

 

new vocabulary (looked up by me in past few months)

 

 

new vocabulary

 

 

new vocabulary post

 

 

new vocabulary IV

 

 

new vocabulary III

 

 

Vocabulary: Building and Using One’s Own; The Delight of Same; Its Value to a Writer

 

 

 

a deft turn of phase

 

What was once shocking becomes quaint: That’s how it goes. The Charleston now looks like a silly dance, Elvis is just a sweaty guy, nobody’s fainting while watching screenings of “The Exorcist” anymore and jazz is now the province of TURTLENECKED NERDS. We’re assured there was a time when van Gogh’s paintings horrified audiences, but today reproductions of them hang in college dorm rooms. This process is not tragic; as these things lose their power to shock, they reveal new virtues. Nothing stays boundary-pushing forever. …

— “The Greatest Love Story of All Time Is Also the Strangest,” By B.D. McClay, The New York Times, February 14,  2026

 

— posted by Roger W. Smith

   March 2026

word control (same as pest control?)

 

Anthony John Terlato was born on May 11, 1934, in Brooklyn and grew up in the Bensonhurst neighborhood. His father, Salvatore, sold insurance and real estate, and his mother, Frances (Giarusso) Terlato, kept house  [italics added]. They poured wine with dinner and, in the European fashion, mixed a little wine with water for young Anthony.

“Anthony Terlato, Who Brought Pinot Grigio to the U.S., Dies at 86.” The New York Times, July 23, 2020

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Growing up in the 50s, we all knew what a housewife was.

June Cleaver was a housewife.

My mother, college educated, was a housewife.

This “pejorative” word is banned in the media now.

As are stewardess and waitress.

Such meddling by language monitors (think hall monitor) shows ignorance and a lack of comprehension of how languages work. And of the ingenuity that often underlies them.

We all know what middlebrow and busybody mean. Clever words that “work.” Should they be banned or retooled?

Same with housewife.

Such supercilious stupidity.

 

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Scrooge was known for keeping Christmas in his own miserly way (which is to say, not keeping it).

Bob Cratchit’s wife kept house.

Do the language police long for the Victorian days?

Perhaps toilet should everywhere be replaced with water closet.

And bar with public house.

 

— posted by Roger W. Smith

   August 2025

 

 

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See also:

https://rogers-rhetoric.com/2023/01/27/the-language-police-come-for-the-word-fiel

when reporting qualifies as literature

‘A Texas Dad Tried to Kayak His Daughters’ – WSJ 7-6-2025

 

“A Texas Dad Tried to Kayak to His Daughters. The Girls Texted ‘I Love You.’ ”

By Patience Haggin

The Wall Street Journal

July 6 2025

 

A story like this would make Hemingway envious.

 

— posted by Roger W. Smith

   June 6. 2025