Tag Archives: Roger W. Smith

word control (same as pest control?)

 

Anthony John Terlato was born on May 11, 1934, in Brooklyn and grew up in the Bensonhurst neighborhood. His father, Salvatore, sold insurance and real estate, and his mother, Frances (Giarusso) Terlato, kept house  [italics added]. They poured wine with dinner and, in the European fashion, mixed a little wine with water for young Anthony.

“Anthony Terlato, Who Brought Pinot Grigio to the U.S., Dies at 86.” The New York Times, July 23, 2020

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Growing up in the 50s, we all knew what a housewife was.

June Cleaver was a housewife.

My mother, college educated, was a housewife.

This “pejorative” word is banned in the media now.

As are stewardess and waitress.

Such meddling by language monitors (think hall monitor) shows ignorance and a lack of comprehension of how languages work. And of the ingenuity that often underlies them.

We all know what middlebrow and busybody mean. Clever words that “work.” Should they be banned or retooled?

Same with housewife.

Such supercilious stupidity.

 

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Scrooge was known for keeping Christmas in his own miserly way (which is to say, not keeping it).

Bob Cratchit’s wife kept house.

Do the language police long for the Victorian days?

Perhaps toilet should everywhere be replaced with water closet.

And bar with public house.

 

— posted by Roger W. Smith

   August 2025

 

 

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See also:

https://rogers-rhetoric.com/2023/01/27/the-language-police-come-for-the-word-fiel

when reporting qualifies as literature

‘A Texas Dad Tried to Kayak His Daughters’ – WSJ 7-6-2025

 

“A Texas Dad Tried to Kayak to His Daughters. The Girls Texted ‘I Love You.’ ”

By Patience Haggin

The Wall Street Journal

July 6 2025

 

A story like this would make Hemingway envious.

 

— posted by Roger W. Smith

   June 6. 2025

“A Note on the Family Tongue”

 

excerpts – ‘A Note on the Family Tongue’

 

“SINCE BOTH WJ AND HJ were lifelong writers, the most enduring influence from their father was his gift of language.” — F. O. Mathiessen

Posted here (PDF above):

F. O. Mathiessen, “A Note on the Family Tongue”

IN F. O. Mathiessen, The James Family: Including Selections from the Writings of Henry James, Senior, William, Henry, & Alice James (New York: Afred A. Knopf, 1961), pp. 101-112

 

— posted by Roger W. Smith

   May 2025

adjective versus proper noun

 

A question for the writer of the Jan. 23 Metro headline “Episcopalian bishop has a history with Trump”: Would you top a story with “Californian governor meets with first responders”? Or “Virginian senator celebrates reelection”? Like “Californian” and “Virginian,” “Episcopalian” is almost always a noun denoting a person — in this case, a member of the Episcopal Church.

To The Post’s credit, the [words in the title of the] article was correct: “the Episcopal bishop of Washington.”

— Maurice Fliess, letter to editor, The Washington Post, January 31 2025

 

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A distinction worth noting. And why do Republicans always refer to the DEMOCRAT party? They do it with a malign intent. To lessen (so they believe) by nomenclature the party’s stature.

 

— posted by Roger W. Smith

   January 31, 2025

a splendid sentence

 

 

“Schwartz’s poems, especially the later ones, are dated. They groan under a freight of leaden rhymes and — Schwartz had a capacious mind — showy philosophical and literary references, spillover from the overstocked pantry that was his mind.”

— Dwight Garner, “Delmore Schwartz’s Poems Are Like Salt Flicked on the World,” The New York Times, April 8, 2024

review of The Collected Poems of Delmore Schwartz, edited by Ben Mazer

 

— posted by Roger W. Smith

  April 11, 2024

how to write; Exhibit C

 

Ben and Jerry’s – WSJ 3-19-2024

 

Posted here:

Ben & Jerry’s Owner Loses Its Taste for Ice Cream

Unilever plans to spin off its ice-cream business, which includes Magnum and Popsicle, and could consider a sale

By Saabira Chaudhuri

The Wall Street Journal

March 19, 2024

My business journalism instructor, Gilbert T. Sewall, was correct when he observed that the Wall Street Journal is notable for the excellence of its writing per se.

The best term I can come up with to describe this piece is limpid.

Everything is covered, succinctly. The facts have all been reported, are all there.

The business issues are made clear.

A layman (i.e., someone not in the business world) can enjoy this piece. Pithy phrases achieve this result:

Ben & Jerry’s owner Unilever has lost its taste for the business.

Ben & Jerry’s, once regarded by analysts as a jewel in Unilever’s crown, has turned into something of a thorn in its side.

Ben & Jerry’s hasn’t shied away from taking a stand on social causes.

Ice cream has been a tough business for … consumer-goods companies. …

Our high school English teacher taught us about topic sentences. Here we see embedded “topic sentences” that ensure that the reader does not get lost and gets the import of the piece.

 

posted by Roger W. Smith

   March 2024